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You swore you'd never love again,
And then you chose to let her in.
At first, she was your serving girl,
Until her eyes became your world.

It started with a chipped teacup.
You never meant to give her up.

"All curses break with true love's kiss!"
She tries again to kiss your lips,
But misunderstanding clouds your eyes
And, fearing treason, you search for lies.

You have to banish her from your sight
You couldn't hurt her, try as you might;
Going back to your daily routine
You are surprised by a visit from the Queen.

She deceitfully feeds you lies of you love,
You fear there's no comfort, e'en from above.

You know now the promises your love couldn't tell.
You realize her affection could have broken the spell.
To bring her back, there's nothing to sell--
No deal to make,
No love left to take,
Only one memory; her name was Belle.
I wrote this based on the show "Once Upon a Time." ...I am desperately in love with Rumple!!!!!! ^^ <3
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crystal-7-canyon Featured By Owner 1 day ago
Aaaaah, I love this sooooooo much, thank you!
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Dragonfire9000 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
So amazingly accurate....excellent job 😊
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brnin8or Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! ^w^
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starwitch12372 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This makes my heart hurt :( (Sad) Oh Rumple! Beautiful work!
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brnin8or Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
 Oh thank you so much!! ^^ <33
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animallover-13-95 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
God this is amazing!
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brnin8or Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much~! :D
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RedRaven19 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Student General Artist
That's absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
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brnin8or Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! ^^ <3
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Merc-ury Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really well written.~
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