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You swore you'd never love again,
And then you chose to let her in.
At first, she was your serving girl,
Until her eyes became your world.

It started with a chipped teacup.
You never meant to give her up.

"All curses break with true love's kiss!"
She tries again to kiss your lips,
But misunderstanding clouds your eyes
And, fearing treason, you search for lies.

You have to banish her from your sight
You couldn't hurt her, try as you might;
Going back to your daily routine
You are surprised by a visit from the Queen.

She deceitfully feeds you lies of you love,
You fear there's no comfort, e'en from above.

You know now the promises your love couldn't tell.
You realize her affection could have broken the spell.
To bring her back, there's nothing to sell--
No deal to make,
No love left to take,
Only one memory; her name was Belle.
I wrote this based on the show "Once Upon a Time." ...I am desperately in love with Rumple!!!!!! ^^ <3
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Rumpels-Slave-Girl Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very pretty. :)
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crystal-7-canyon Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014
Aaaaah, I love this sooooooo much, thank you!
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brnin8or Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Haha thank you!! I'm so glad you liked it!! <3 ^^
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Dragonfire9000 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
So amazingly accurate....excellent job 😊
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brnin8or Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! ^w^
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starwitch12372 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This makes my heart hurt :( (Sad) Oh Rumple! Beautiful work!
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:iconbrnin8or:
brnin8or Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
 Oh thank you so much!! ^^ <33
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animallover-13-95 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
God this is amazing!
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:iconbrnin8or:
brnin8or Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much~! :D
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RedRaven19 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Student General Artist
That's absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
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:iconbrnin8or:
brnin8or Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! ^^ <3
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Merc-ury Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really well written.~
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:iconbrnin8or:
brnin8or Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much! :D That means a lot. ^^
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Merc-ury Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem.
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yunadustrial Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012
this is awesome.
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brnin8or Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! It means a lot! ^^
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kisshuluver56 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Student Filmographer
that made me cry
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:iconbrnin8or:
brnin8or Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know! That whole episode made me cry!! D':
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:iconkisshuluver56:
kisshuluver56 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Student Filmographer
:(
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Pandora-Skye Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice.
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brnin8or Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks~ ^^
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melxrumple Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
What happened in this "once upon a time" you talk about with rumple and belle?
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brnin8or Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, Rumple makes a deal with her father that she will come be his serving girl in exchange for peace in his kingdom. So Belle comes to live with him and she decides to be kind to him and he falls for her and decides to trust her to go out and run an errand, not actually expecting her to come back, but she meets the evil queen on the way (she doesn't know the queen is evil) and the queen guesses her situation and tells her that he is cursed and that true love's kiss will break any curse so she returns and kisses him but he believes that the queen was using her to weaken him do he sends her away and the queen comes later and lies and tells him that she was killed. Any questions? ^^
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melxrumple Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012
Holy Talito! but she didn't actually die right? Poor Rumple.... :(
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brnin8or Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol nope. :3 Have you watched the show? Cause she comes back in the season finale. :D (lol I cried...^^")
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melxrumple Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012
No acctually I havent....wut channel is it in?
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brnin8or Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ABC, I believe. It's on Netflix too, if you have that. :3 I highly recommend it. ^^
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TXTRgrl Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
do you know when the second season comes to netflix Q_Q I must know~~~
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brnin8or Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well I'm pretty sure that the season premier is this Sunday? Um....They put out some behind the scenes stuff recently...I'm pretty sure if you look it up on Google it'll come up. X3 Sorry if I'm not much help~
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melxrumple Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012
mkaii. thanx a bunch! WaIT! at what time and when?...sorry....
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brnin8or Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ummm usually on Sundays at 7 PM. And it's k. Feel free to bug me cause it's worth watching! ^^
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Lysssa1031 Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
So sweet! I love Rumpelstiltskin!
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brnin8or Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!! Me too~ <3 ^^
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PineapplePrincesBA Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Student Writer
I love it so sad and beautiful :') I hardly ever cry but that episode got me to tear up a little poor Rumple and poor(er) Belle
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brnin8or Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know!! It was so sad! I wish they would elaborate on that plot...they haven't really said much of anything about it since that episode and I want a happy ending, dang it! ;)
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PineapplePrincesBA Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Student Writer
Same here but I also really want him to show off that dark evil side by telling the queen to do something but her stop him, kind of showing the contrast in characters his so dark and pained vs her light and kind of young spiritedness
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brnin8or Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ohhh dude! That would be so cute!!! ...I want them to kiss again. lol
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PineapplePrincesBA Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Student Writer
Urgh agreed
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brnin8or Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol. :3
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PineapplePrincesBA Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Student Writer
TEEHEE
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pikachulover94 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012
Amazing
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brnin8or Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D
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pikachulover94 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012
Your welcome I have to show this to my friend.
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LoveAndMusicForever Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
Love this! The episode was amazing! So much pain and love in one episode!!!
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brnin8or Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!! And I totally agree! It has to be my favorite episode so far. ^^ <3
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